The Hinge That Shouldn’t Have Moved by Fendy S. Tulodo

At 3:12 a.m., the cabin door creaked—but the wind had died an hour ago.

Harvey didn’t breathe. Didn’t blink. The fire had smothered itself into coal-colored silence, but something—something—moved. Not outside, not scratching the walls like the wolves did last winter. It was inside. Just past the trapdoor.

Three days he’d tracked the Red Stitch. Three nights without sleep, gut-fed on adrenaline and canned beans. Locals said it wasn’t an animal. Said it watched. Harvey didn’t care what they believed. His cousin was dead. Split open from spine to chin like a zipper peeled wrong. He’d seen the remains—steamed in the snow like slaughterhouse waste.

This was no job anymore. This was something else.

The hinge moved again. A stifled tick in the dark.

He cocked his rifle toward the basement and waited.

Harvey Wren had been a wildlife tracker for over a decade. Former Army, too—discharged after a mine exploded three feet from his squad. His hearing never fully recovered in the left ear. He’d tracked grizzlies in Wyoming, and mountain lions in British Columbia. Nothing ever made him afraid.

Not until the trail markers started vanishing.

It began near Crooked Elk Pass. Scratches—long, curved, four-pronged—appeared six feet high on spruce bark. No bear could reach that. The air smelled off. Not bad, just off. Like iron and burned wiring. The moment he stepped off the official trail, things changed. Birdsong ceased. Trees leaned wrong. Moss curled inward.

The creature never left blood. Never left fur. But Harvey found other signs: a torn boot, half a jawbone. A child’s drawing impaled on a thorn. He’d walked that horror until it led here—a half-buried forest cabin, thirty miles from the nearest fire road.

The place had been empty when he arrived. Until now.

The basement door hadn’t opened.

But the air had changed. Warmer. Breathing on him. Harvey knew the smell of enclosed rot—whatever was down there, it had waited long enough.

He stood and moved slowly. Each footfall was planned, measured. He didn’t rush. Rushing got people killed.

The trapdoor’s metal ring was rusted stiff. He didn’t touch it. Instead, he poured a line of salt around the door and settled back, facing it.

Nothing. For an hour.

Then, at 4:22 a.m., it spoke.

Not words. Scraping.

Long, deliberate drags—like claws across stone, coming up the steps.

The Red Stitch was real. And it wasn’t hiding anymore.

Harvey remembered what the old woman in town told him.

“You don’t hunt it,” she said, crushing tobacco in a blue bowl. “It lets you think you do. It makes itself small until you’re close. Then it blooms.”

He’d chalked it up to superstition. But now, as the trapdoor bulged upward and the salt began to smoke, Harvey understood. He was never the predator. He was bait.

And it was time.

He raised the rifle, cocked it once, and waited.

The door didn’t open.

The fire pit hissed. Then something new entered the room—not a beast. Not a creature. A boy.

He couldn’t have been more than eleven. Filthy hoodie, shoeless, bleeding at the ankles. His eyes were all pupil.

Harvey’s grip tightened. “Stop there.”

The boy stood between the fireplace and the table. No footprints. No breath.

Then the boy blinked. And it wasn’t a child anymore.

Its jaw cracked open, far too wide. Tongue lined with thorns. The hoodie melted into its flesh, turning inside out with a sound like torn leather. Harvey fired once—center mass.

The thing staggered, hissed—not in pain, but disapproval. Like a parent catching a lie.

Then it ran at him.

Harvey dropped the rifle, grabbed the iron poker from the fire pit, and swung. The hit connected—something snapped, either bone or illusion. The creature collapsed against the wall. Screeched once. Twitched. Then peeled itself backward, slipping down the trapdoor like water down a drain.

Gone.

He didn’t chase it.

Instead, he locked the cabin, burned the salt ring again, and waited until daylight.

He didn’t sleep. Didn’t cry. He watched.

At dawn, the frost returned. The air grew sharp again. The woods settled into a new stillness—like something had passed.

Harvey left the cabin and hiked five miles until his sat-phone connected. He told no one what he saw. Just requested a chopper to retrieve the remains near Crooked Elk Pass.

He marked the cabin’s GPS in a sealed journal and buried it beside the road, beneath a split boulder.

Then he went home.

Three weeks later, Harvey sat in a cheap motel outside Missoula. Snow fell gently outside. His beard had grown in wild. Eyes darker now. He’d started sketching again—something he hadn’t done since Iraq.

One drawing kept repeating: a face. Not a child. Not a beast. Something in-between, with a hinge in its mouth.

The phone rang.

Blocked number.

He answered. Static. Then a voice. His cousin’s voice.

“Harv… you never saw it all.”

He dropped the phone.

And from the motel’s bathroom, a hinge moved.

Just once.

Not wind.

Not hinges.

Not again.

Harvey turned. Slowly.

And smiled.

“Come on, then.”

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Fendy S. Tulodo

Fendy writes razor-edge stories about the fractures in the human soul. His characters claw through moral wastelands—rebels chasing redemption, power players toeing bloodstained lines. Every sentence dissects the raw nerves of choice when there are no clean hands left.

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